1984. The
coal miners' strike started some months ago. I'm waiting for my dad to come. He
is in a protest march claiming for our rights. We don't have
enough food since the strike started. I'm hungry. I go outside to look for food. Suddenly I see her: the responsible of our misfortune.
I have edited this. I removed "I'm hungry" in the sentence "I'm hungry because we don't have enough food since the strike started". I have written "I'm hungry" after that sentence.
ReplyDeleteAlso I split up the sentence "I go outside to look for food. Suddenly I see her" in two sentences.